I love the title design and the beginning is done very well though I think the "nuts" need to be more obvious in the first scene.
Apparently you're still working on it -- I think the drawing from 09 seconds and beyond need to refine a little bit more or maybe it is the timing issue -- I get a little confused at the end. Otherwise nice job, I like the drawing style.
a little jumpy, makes me nervous watching it and i don't like the white as a ending. just some minor stuff for next week though. why sketches? are the images complete to the way you want them to be?
Actually, I like the jagged quality of this animation. I think the low frame rate helps it. However, I think if there were some are of solid black it would really help the compositions pop more and emphasize the important elements.
Overall a good piece. Would have liked to have seen the idea about the cut paper utilized. Feeling a little rushed in the beginning, it's hard to tell the actions of the two squirrels. We'd like to see more of the evil dogs too, and perhaps a more solid look conclusion that doesn't clip to a title-screen. Great work.
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I love the title design and the beginning is done very well though I think the "nuts" need to be more obvious in the first scene.
Apparently you're still working on it -- I think the drawing from 09 seconds and beyond need to refine a little bit more or maybe it is the timing issue -- I get a little confused at the end. Otherwise nice job, I like the drawing style.
a little jumpy, makes me nervous watching it and i don't like the white as a ending. just some minor stuff for next week though. why sketches? are the images complete to the way you want them to be?
I loove the sketchy drawings! I wanna hear the sound. The falling scene is AWESOME!
Oh, i find some of the scenes too fast, but the quickness works well with the fall.
Actually, I like the jagged quality of this animation. I think the low frame rate helps it. However, I think if there were some are of solid black it would really help the compositions pop more and emphasize the important elements.
Overall a good piece. Would have liked to have seen the idea about the cut paper utilized. Feeling a little rushed in the beginning, it's hard to tell the actions of the two squirrels. We'd like to see more of the evil dogs too, and perhaps a more solid look conclusion that doesn't clip to a title-screen. Great work.
I think the current speed you have for the final project works great. I like the sketchy drawings, etc. Wish the ending is a bit longer.
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