- Looks like you didn't change much to the overall project. A lot of the original minor errors still exist and the introduction is still far too swift.
- Consider fine tuning further, and do not be afraid to tack on ten more seconds to the piece so that you have a bit more flow during the introduction and zoom sections. Particularly the zoom montage, as it seems more broken now than before.
Overall, I feel like a lot of the issues we talked about in calls were addressed and cleaned up. If anything, maybe the intro shot could have been held for another .5 seconds or so. The transitions are more refined
I think now you have the photo stays in for a second longer before the girl comes in work much better. Still feels that the transition of the buildings (the 2nd image that pans from top to bottom) needs to slow down just a bit if possible.
I did not see that drastic of a change. The shot away from the building into the sky still throws me off. The ending does seem to be smoothed off. I almost want to say that I liked last weeks better.
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- Looks like you didn't change much to the overall project. A lot of the original minor errors still exist and the introduction is still far too swift.
- Consider fine tuning further, and do not be afraid to tack on ten more seconds to the piece so that you have a bit more flow during the introduction and zoom sections. Particularly the zoom montage, as it seems more broken now than before.
Overall, I feel like a lot of the issues we talked about in calls were addressed and cleaned up. If anything, maybe the intro shot could have been held for another .5 seconds or so. The transitions are more refined
I think now you have the photo stays in for a second longer before the girl comes in work much better. Still feels that the transition of the buildings (the 2nd image that pans from top to bottom) needs to slow down just a bit if possible.
Otherwise, it looks good.
Transitions are much smoother and this makes the overall piece work well. It looks like she is positioned in a TV screen...cool effect!
I did not see that drastic of a change. The shot away from the building into the sky still throws me off. The ending does seem to be smoothed off. I almost want to say that I liked last weeks better.
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